Second Chance:

[Firestorm]

sleep well Grand

[Grand58742]

Well................

What's next? :D

Thanks Grand. It really is a very good story. Looking forward to your next one.

Next? Next I get a good night's sleep lol

[Ozarks Lady]

Well................

What's next? :D

Thanks Grand. It really is a very good story. Looking forward to your next one.

[PJaster]

Grand58742, I fully understand, your self labeling as ~amateur~ for those reading your works though, they are striving to compliment you, or possibly encourage you....

for those who fit the above, a few words

A. profession, what one is trained in & for, may or may not be your JOB
B. avocation, something one enjoys doing, regardless of other training(s) for hire, a fine line distinction
of A.
C. Job, not necessarily related to above, but you get paid for it!
D. hobby, an enjoyable use of time, whether you create something or not, does not relate to money.
E. Amateur, a person who does something, but not for financial gain.

E. has NO bearing upon the Quality of, or Lack of quality of the end product. It is simply done, with the thought of no financial gain.

Grand is one of the finest Amateur Writers that currently produce literature, for others pleasures, if he ever decides to publish, For Money, he will no longer be an Amateur, it is simple as that.

I enjoyed the Epilogue, in fact, a light Oregon Mist seemed to come on suddenly, I am sure that is what it was.... hmmm, very close to my tear ducts though, must be a coincidence......

[50BMG]

Thats was a great story Grand with a awsome ending. Lucky also has me hooked and I look forward to more if you get around to it. You really should be getting paid for your stories, your talent will make you a rich man
DB

[ebb]

Thanks so much Grand i thought i had lost the ending of this story. I finally found it listed at Katy in FLs blog ( i wish i knew how to manuver around in a blog) and the end was worth the wait . The story was great and the writing better, thanks for being so generous with you story and time. Ebb

[blacklab]

Simply outstanding story. Thanks very much.
Blacklab

[stonewater]

The only thing that can bring a muslim out of his faith is a true revelation of Jesus Christ. the koran tells them he IS the messiah, they are just not sure what to do with him as the koran contradicts itself all over the place. there are muslims all over the world converting to christianity because they have a face to face encounter with our risen Lord. in places all over the world men and women are seeing Jesus himself and granting them repentance.

Pray for radical islam God can do things that no one else can. true love covers a multitude of sins. one by one we can make them true brothers.

[C-POP]

Great as always Grand .I'd like to thank this site and others for allowing the writers a place to post their stories without you we would never know these great writers were out there .
Grand as others have said you should think about this as a profession.
JMHO

[barfife]

Job well done. Thanks

[huckridge]

Thanks Grand for a great story. It must be a wonderful experience to be able to communicate your thoughts this well. It's first class all the way.

[Jellyman]

Wow, Grand, artfully played! I was already grieving for Charlie when you brought him back! i also appreciate your thoughts on the story. The back story always makes the story itself richer to me. My heartfelt thanks and prayers for your continued success!

[Foghorn]

Another vote of thanks here ! It has been a real pleasure to look for new chapters of this story everyday.

[RunAndGun]

As usual, Outstanding Grande!

I find myself once again unable to articulate how much I have enjoyed this and how much I appreciate your sharing of your talent!

Thank You!

[jwh123]

Thanks for sharing your writing talents with us, and for an EXCELLENT story. It does indeed sound too possible to happen if not checked.