Second Chance:

[sewbeit221]

Wow!
Your ending did not dissapoint, this was totally entertaining as well as educational. So many frightening things I did not know about shari'a law. Thanks again Grand for sharing your gift and again so sorry for being a jerk.

[jpr9954]

What a great way to start the morning!

I have been following Second Chance since the beginning and I have to say when Cindy called the Sheriff of Unicoi County "Dad", my eyes began to water a bit. I have always enjoyed this story and its location as I live just across the border in the Asheville, NC area and am somewhat familiar with Erwin and Unicoi County.

Thank you for finishing this story and I look for more stories to come from your talented pen.

[Gwynmael]

Whew! Thanks for keeping Charlie around, I got pretty attached.
The ending for me is perfect. It wraps things up and satisfies my desire to find out what happens "later".
And YES your writing talent IS worthy of publication, recognition, and payment! I'd happily purchase a hardback and would willingly scrounge to do it.
Thanks again, Grand

[610Alpha]

Thank you for putting the other story aside! You illustrate what radical islam is willing to do and remind us ALL to be diligent to fight it. Evil prevails when good men stand by and do nothing.

elittle
former K-town resident

[Bear4570]

Not to be repeatitive but WOW....just WOW

Thank you for taking the time and effort in writing this story. I have read and enjoyed your previous works but this was by far my favorite...hands down. Your writing has a way of pulling the reader into the story and getting them not only involved at an intellectual level but at an emotional level as well and that sir is a god given talent and we as readers have been blessed the be the recipients of that gift.

Thank you.

[Fanderal]

Thank You Grand for an amazing ride; better than most roller coasters.

Islam IS the greatest threat we have ever faced, and in the end it will come down to genocide. THEM or US. We must somehow get them to understand that the choices are tolerance, and co-existence, for everyone, or NON-EXISTENCE for them. Personally I don't think they are that trainable.


Anyway, Thanks again Grand
Fanderal

[errn]

Grand,

Just gotta second all the others,

"Thank you!!!"
don

[jbriii]

Can't really say anything that hasn't already been said. This story has captivated me since I first started reading it on FS. The way it was written I could picture everything so clearly like I was right there. I too am glad Charlie survived. I know where you were coming form with your original intent though. I think you gave us the true picture of the dangers of Islam. But God does work in misterious ways......... :)

BTW - Wasn't that really Charlie's 3rd Chance after surviving?

[jwh123]

Thanks for sharing your writing talents with us, and for an EXCELLENT story. It does indeed sound too possible to happen if not checked.

[RunAndGun]

As usual, Outstanding Grande!

I find myself once again unable to articulate how much I have enjoyed this and how much I appreciate your sharing of your talent!

Thank You!

[Foghorn]

Another vote of thanks here ! It has been a real pleasure to look for new chapters of this story everyday.

[Jellyman]

Wow, Grand, artfully played! I was already grieving for Charlie when you brought him back! i also appreciate your thoughts on the story. The back story always makes the story itself richer to me. My heartfelt thanks and prayers for your continued success!

[huckridge]

Thanks Grand for a great story. It must be a wonderful experience to be able to communicate your thoughts this well. It's first class all the way.

[barfife]

Job well done. Thanks

[C-POP]

Great as always Grand .I'd like to thank this site and others for allowing the writers a place to post their stories without you we would never know these great writers were out there .
Grand as others have said you should think about this as a profession.
JMHO