JDY Fiction - It's A Nice Place To Visit, But...

[Jerry D Young]

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[Jerry D Young]

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[Jerry D Young]

[FONT="Times New Roman"]Heathershrugged.

[Jerry D Young]

Almost knockedoff her feet when she turned, she turned back to continue up the street. Warrenand Jake were well ahead now, with Linda, no longer encumbered with the poleand bucket, gaining on them.



She was tryingto shrug out of her backpack to be able to move better and faster. When thepack swung down and around on one shoulder it threw her off balance. She wentdown the same as Hanna.



Heather couldtell that Adam wanted to stop and help, the way he shifted over and tried toget to her. But when Adam reached her, he could tell it was too late. Too manypeople stepping on her and a couple falling across her and she was done, headtwisted back, eyes open, but lifeless.



[FONT="Times New Roman"]The screams werelouder behind them now and there was a dull roar, getting inexorably closer.They

[barfife]

thanks for sharing your talent with us.

[rockriver]

i like the start. both of my grandmothers used both their first and middle names.
a close relative just moved to new york and is working on a new project.
so i've got the story visualized.

[rockriver]

whew.. the shtf oops.. water with s in it htf
early in this story.
thanks a lot.
rr

[eviltwin]

Nice Short Jerry. I just noticed it :)