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  • #16
    New chapter posting

    New chapter

    Chapter 7

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    • #17
      Very good writing and an outstanding story line .
      Please keep it coming!!!!

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      • #18
        Very enjoyable! Thank you!

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        • #19
          Very good story. Thank you.

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          • #20
            Nice Ground work...looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
            "The difference between genius and stupidity is . . .genius has its limits."~Albert Einstein

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            • #21
              I know we can't use the "M" word but if we could......I would.





              Me likey your story very much. Thank you.

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              • #22
                Excellent, Keep it coming. Thanks BTW!!

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                • #23
                  Reading a good story line here, hope more is forth coming :cool:

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                  • #24
                    I can not find the first 4 chapters. Any help would be appreciated.

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                    • #25
                      Boris- "He's famous, has picture on three dollar bill!"

                      Rocky- "Wow! I've never even seen a three dollar bill!"

                      Boris- "Is it my fault you're poor?"

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